Inspired by the Sunday Times we have been writing Small Ad's Big Stories in our literacy warm ups. We have 5 minutes to write a story based around an object for sale on ebay. The object is pot luck and it's whatever comes up first. this time we got Steven Gerard's football boots and a pop up pink princess castle! Here are some of our stories.
It all started when my daughter, aged 5, had a pink princess pop up castle. Oh how she adored her castle. Now, she kept it until she was 14 years old. I had been stuck with it for longer than I thought.She wouldn't let me take it away.She grew older.she had children . She got ill .She died at the age of 36 .Princess pop up castle for sale . Price £100.
By Lottie Low
A long time ago there was a little girl called Miya who used this pop up castle. Every day she would use it. There was one terrible day when Miya went to the river 7, she fell in. She was pulled down further and further into the see, until I couldn't sea her anymore. This is one of the last memories I have of Miya, I sold the rest! It would mean a lot to me if you could buy this pop up castle so I can buy a house in Francisco.
By Poppy Elton
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poppy
4/16/2015 01:53:02 am
I know I got see and sea mixed up! There is also other mistakes I have spotted.
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nina stone
4/16/2015 02:23:55 am
Well done for noticing!! 👍
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